I've decided to try writing a sex story, but since this is my first time, I wanted to post what I have so far to see what people think. I would appreciate any tips. :rose:

Date Night

Olivia examined the scrap of cloth in her hand. She had been slightly surprised when she got up this morning to find a thong on the table and a note that read “We’re going out tonight. Wear this, or else. Be ready by seven.” At the time she rolled her eyes and let her mind wander at the “or else” but once she realized that it was a vibrating thong she left it alone and went about her day. It didn’t take much guessing to figure out what Noah was up to, and since he likes to pretend that he’s mysterious from time to time, Olivia decided that it was best for now to pretend that she didn’t know.

Noah didn’t say where they were going, but, because he would be coming straight from work, Olivia wanted to wear something that wasn’t super casual. Her eyes rested on her newest dress. It was a dark purple halter dress that would look nice next to the blue button down shirt and dark gray slacks that Noah wore to work that morning. She remembered Noah’s reaction to the dress when she modeled it for him. The hungry look in his eye, the way he growled as he pulled her to him, the way his hands felt as he slowly slid off the dress… Olivia shook her head to clear her mind of those thoughts. She decided that tonight wouldn’t be the night for finding out what he meant by “or else” but she couldn’t let him just get away with what he had planned. She grabbed the dress and turned to lay it on the bed when her eyes caught sight of a shopping bag hidden in the corner of her closet. She remembered that the dress wasn’t the only thing she bought on that shopping trip and she knew what to do. Now she just needed to get ready.

There was a knock on the bedroom door just as Olivia was slipping on her shoes. Normally she’d wear flats or a low heel, but because she already knew that she wouldn’t completely be in control of herself tonight, she wore her four inch heels that put her at the same height as Noah, 6’1”. She watched as Noah checked her out. His eyes slowly going up her stockinged leg, to her dress where she saw the desire in his eyes, and then finally to her face where his smirk matched hers.

“Are you sure those are the shoes you want to wear?” he asked, his smirk turning more into an impish grin. She smirked even more. There’s no way that man could hide something from her.

“Definitely. Are you sure those are the shoes you want to wear?” Olivia responded and poked her tongue out at him childishly to let him know that she was just teasing. He did the same. Olivia stood up and walked to where Noah stood in the doorway. As she did every day she gave him a hug and a kiss to welcome him home.

“Are you ready to go mister?” she asked him as she walked out of the room, making her hips sway a little more than usual. She knew he was watching her and shook her ass for him.

“Yes ma’am,” Noah replied and quickly followed her.

Olivia had just gotten herself into Noah’s car and all buckled up when she felt a tingle go straight through her pussy. She let out a small gasp and looked at Noah. She had forgotten about the panties.

“Just wanted to make sure that you were a good girl and did what I asked.” He explained.

“I’m always a good girl,” she informed him, trying to give him an innocent face.

“Nice try, but I know the truth my naughty little princess.” He then gave her what she guessed to be the medium vibration. She bit her lip and tried not to squirm. She didn’t want him to get the satisfaction of knowing that so easily affected her. The rest of the car ride was quiet, just music quietly playing in the background. Olivia let herself get lost in fantasies of what tonight would be like and she guessed that Noah was doing the same; or concentrating really hard on driving. Rihanna had just finished reassuring them that “sticks and stones will break my bones but chains and whips excite me” when they arrived at the restaurant.

“Joe’s Crab Shack?” Olivia asked, bewildered. She had been hoping that he would bring her to some new restaurant that, after thoroughly embarrassing herself, she’d never have to go to again.

“Of course, it’s your favorite restaurant, isn’t it?” He grinned at her again and she bit her lip. Of course he brought her here. He was going to pay for this later. Maybe not tonight, but she’ll get him.

 

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True story or sexual fantasy of yours?

First time?

Nice start.....hope the developing plot will include more sensual seduction and explicit erotic details which help the audience to place themselves in the story as you continue.

Please continue pi_princess.

 

she asked him as she walked out of the room .

 

please tellme there is more i am loving this!

 

Its a good introduction, but is there more? or has the story ended in the resturaunt?